考研英语待批改作文：

　　5-7分

　　第一篇

　　Dear Pro. Smith,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your assistance. If it had not been for your assistance in sending timely the list of reference books which I asked for, I fear that I would have not been achieved my essay on the deadline.

　　Everyone agrees that it was you who save munch valuable time for me to search the reference books in the library and these reference books which are rather professional conform to the requirements of my essay. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：

　　Dear Pro. Smith,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your assistance. If it had not been for your assistance in sending timelythe list of reference books(加to me timely) which I asked for, I fear that I would have not been achieved my essay on the deadline.

　　Everyone agrees that it was you who save(改为saved) munch valuable time for me to search the reference books in the library and these reference books which are rather professional conform to the requirements of my essay. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　6分

　　同学你好，写作文时要再细心一些，尽量避免单词拼写的错误。时态要保持前后一致。

　　考研英语待批改作文：

　　5-7分

　　第一篇

　　Dear Pro. Smith,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your assistance. If it had not been for your assistance in sending timely the list of reference books which I asked for, I fear that I would have not been achieved my essay on the deadline.

　　Everyone agrees that it was you who save munch valuable time for me to search the reference books in the library and these reference books which are rather professional conform to the requirements of my essay. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：

　　Dear Pro. Smith,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your assistance. If it had not been for your assistance in sending timelythe list of reference books(加to me timely) which I asked for, I fear that I would have not been achieved my essay on the deadline.

　　Everyone agrees that it was you who save(改为saved) munch valuable time for me to search the reference books in the library and these reference books which are rather professional conform to the requirements of my essay. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　6分

　　同学你好，写作文时要再细心一些，尽量避免单词拼写的错误。时态要保持前后一致。